What could a mycelial story structure look like?


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Last week, I recorded an upcoming episode of Our Opinions Are Correct, the Hugo Award-winning podcast hosted by two of my favorite people, Annalee Newitz and Charlie Jane Anders. (I've been on twice before—you can listen to my thoughts on stories about empire and stories about public health.) This time, I talked about fungal science and the ways in which speculative fiction is way behind the curve in how we talk about fungus.

There's a great article by Carrie Sessarego in Clarkesworld that breaks down the usual modes for fungi in speculative fiction, which comes down to: it consumes, it controls, it competes, it is way too smart for us. Overall, it means that people are relying on old understandings of what fungi are and can do instead of thinking through all the possibilities afforded to us when we actually look at our (limited) scientific understanding of this taxonomic kingdom.

(Sidebar: Fungal horror in particular is having a moment right now; Mexican Gothic by Sylvia Moreno-Garcia led a resurgence in people's interest. While it doesn't use a different understanding of fungi for the story, it does use fungi in a novel way to reinforce the story's themes about colonialism.)

I won't rehash everything I covered in the episode—I walked through some basic fungal science and then talked about potential ideas for speculative fiction. What I will talk about now, though, is story structure, because it's something I've been thinking a lot about and don't necessarily have answers to.

In Meander, Spiral, Explode, author Jane Allison examines different physical structures found in nature to argue that we can tell different types of stories following those forms. So as I was working on the OOAC episode, I wondered: what would it mean to use fungal science as a basis for a new storytelling structure? What would mycelial storytelling look like?

(I love Meander, Spiral, Explode, but it is an advanced text, more literary analysis than craft book. Henry Lien's Spring, Summer, Asteroid, Bird is a more friendly and accessible "let's look at alternate story structures" craft book, specifically via Eastern storytelling traditions.)

Brief science lesson: When most people hear the term "fungi," they usually think "mushrooms." Mushrooms are what's called the fruiting body of certain fungal species, the reproductive mechanism by which that fungi's spores are released. There are many more species of fungi than there are mushrooms, in other words. The thing that almost* all fungi have in common, though, is hyphae, which is the cellular unit that creates mycelium. Mycelium is a horizontal structure; there isn't a mycelial hierarchy or distinct parts to it that does one thing or another. Fungi are their mycelium—that is where communication, nutrient exchange, decomposition, and growth all happen. Here's a great article that talks about some of what mycelium does! (Its author, Bethany Brookshire, is another OOAC guest host.)

(*Yeast are single-celled fungi, which means they can't, by nature, have multiple cells that would make up hyphae. But they can form what's called pseudohyphae if they're in colonies!)

So what, exactly, could a mycelial story structure look like? As I'm currently thinking about it, such a story would have to encompass key aspects of mycelium, such as:

  • Horizontal: No point of view or plot thread is prioritized over another
  • Discrete units: The story is not told all at once but, rather, in small portions like scenes and chapters
  • Emergent: The whole of the story reveals more than the sum of its parts
  • Exchange: Each subsection of the story in some way overlaps with others, potentially via characters, themes, motifs, dialogue, or otherwise
  • (And maybe, if we're bold) Decomposition: What we think we understand at the beginning is different from what we understand at the end

Writing these out, I can think of one book that accomplishes these things... and that is There There by Tommy Orange, which chronicles the events historically and more recently leading up to (and during) a pow-wow in Oakland. While I personally think Wandering Stars (the sequel) is a stronger book, I have always been struck by There There's scope and structure.

It's not quite a novel told in short stories, but in the earlier parts of the book, many of the chapters do feel somewhat standalone, and most of them are told from a new point-of-view character. Many of these chapters—and therefore, their POV character—are only tangentially or vaguely related to the pow-wow, especially those which take place in the past. The end is a cliffhanger, not providing tidy answers, and making us look back at the chapters leading up to it in a new light. And while some points of view make more appearances than others, there isn't one or even a few that feel like the "central" perspectives that the other characters are supporting. It's a good example of multiple characters who seem like the main characters in their own lives.

Ultimately, There There is a portrait of the multiplicity of Indigenous experiences in the US, and its structure reinforces that.

I bet, in general, hybrid or experimental would be most successful in whatever mycelial storytelling looks like, allowing the flexibility to mess around and see how to get across the elements I listed above. A novel in short stories makes a lot of sense for fiction. A novel in verse that doesn't prioritize any one voice may work, too. I wonder what it would look like outside of fiction!

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